maggie carnes says
that the way in which i write papers
is a sign of genius.
i say
that i would rather die
than be married, or even engaged
for that matter,
and still eating at dinkins.
i also say
that i wish God had made today
just a little bit gloomier.
with just a few more dark clouds.
and that
you wish i was being sarcastic.
plus
i would like to express the fact
that i am glad
that i can finally be gloomy
without all the unnecessary comments.
and no jared,
this isnt poetry.
Wednesday, October 12, 2005
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i might beg to differ. seems pretty poetic to me, whether you intended it or not. and really, what constitutes poetry, huh? Prof. Ludvigson would probably give you an A on that if you handed it in. one truth about the written word: once it reaches an audience external to its author, its interpretation is up for grabs. therefore. if anyone would like to consider this entry poetry, they can (and in this instance theyd have a good case to say so and also, a good case of arguing that, as poetry, it's not half bad.) and that's all i have to say about that. im 97% sure you will disagree.
after a third reading, i stand my ground. this absolutely works as a poem. and [in my humble opinion] a good one at that.
umm yeah, jared, just so you know
that was a joke.
tandy harolds...you suck.
so you meant it to be a poem, then? dont confuse me. the other night you said...well, nevermind.
"tandy harolds" has got to be one of the coolest names ever.
no fool, i didnt mean for that to be a poem. and i still dont think it is a poem. its just my random thoughts during the day that i cant really tell people about because they'll just laugh at me and think i'm a freak, so i put them in my blog. not a poem. just random thoughts. and the joke was that i put the comment to you in there to start with because you actually think they look like poems. i didnt mean for you defend it and go off on a tangent about how it is a poem and yada yada yada. that was just my way of laughing at you because you think i can write in the first place. and i have no idea what i'm talking about. its been a rough day.
if my name was tandy harolds and i had not seven, but eight numbers attached to it, then would i be cool?
Ok.
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